Once again, you're animation quality blasts most of anything else on Newgrounds off this planet. Reminds me of some cutesy anime opening like Dragon Maid's or something... Nice job!
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Once again, you're animation quality blasts most of anything else on Newgrounds off this planet. Reminds me of some cutesy anime opening like Dragon Maid's or something... Nice job!
In the first shot, yes her thumb does happened to be on the outside of her hand. But I do agree... that's no reason to give it one star. I guess the reason I didn't give it five is that there isn't anything particularly substantial about this animation (yes I'm aware that is intentional, however it is still grounds for why it's not a five star). The animation quality itself is very nice, even if it could use a bit of polishing in the shading and lighting (like anything by Kyoto Animation which is why they make some of the best looking shows ever - they've mastered that final step).
The only shot I think can cause confusion is after she throws the egg and the thumb may look like on the outside. Btw, the dude below did apologize privately with constructive criticism privately. I could've done some more shading and lighting, but I got lazy and just wanted to get done with this since I spent 40 days on it. Anyways, thanks for the response!
As far as the overall animation quality... I can only really give it that it's a lot of pictures (well drawn pictures) accompanied by effects. However, one must not underestimate the message and themes behind all art. The music choice is definitely a plus as well. This felt a tiny bit like reading old political cartoons, but darker with a more sinister tone that can only be achieved by what you pulled off here.
Oh shit... that's what the 18+ thing meant. I thought it was... well actually I don't know what I was expecting lol. Anyways, well done. Yeah the art and direction is top tier. I mean, I stopped when I realized what direction this was going. Eventually, I played through it and I can say from an objective standpoint that this is REALLY good. It really reminds me of the original Fate series. I'm emotionally invested in these characters, and it tells a decent story as well. Although, in my opinion, it's better than the original Fate visual novel by Type-Moon (another thing I picked up somehow unaware that it was hentai lol). Either way, that's how I found out one of my favorite franchises came from a hentai novel.
You should make something kinda like the Sift Heads Series!
I TYPED IN "GEOMETRY DASH RUBY"... HOW THE FUCK WAS THIS THE FIRST GODDAMN THING THAT POPS UP!??!?!?!?
Look: you're a talented artist and you have the animation ability, so why hentai... is my question.
To your first question: Because the universe seems to have a sense of humor. That made me chuckle, thanks. I needed that.
To your second question: Why not... Is my answer.
Have a good one!
Tbh, if you're using serum, there's basically no need for the other ones you used like 3X OSC. Obviously, if there's specific sounds though, like when I'll occassionally use Sakura for harps or something. Everything in this even the growls just sounds barely filtered at all. Throw a compressor on those growls, besides, they sound alot like you just took presets or something. They don't really fit. But really, throw a compressor. They clip everything out. The strings were actually really nice. That violin in the beginning was quite pretty. Also those chords sound like borderline sawtooth waves. Like you didn't add detune, or layer them at all. Reverb sounds very mono (as opposed to stereo). Otherwise, you have yourself a pretty nice track. Nice ideas.
Reason why I use 3xOsc because I feel more comfortable (all of my previous songs has a heavy use of it.) I did use a compressor, maybe I should crank it up a little. Thanks for your review! :D
noice man! if you have to close out a meme's shelf life, this is how you do it
I love the use of borderline blurring and less detail in background things while still making the colors (of the background) still vibrant even though they are more neutral. This contrasts masterfully with the exquisite detail to the rabbit who although is holding a gun and has blood spattered across his face, appears sad and mournful rather than threatening. Perfect foreshadowing. Is the Alice is Dead series going to be one of those stories where the protagonist used to be a bad guy, but when he started over (losing his memories), he picked up morals along the way? Anyway... keep it up... I hope you keep going! Love this, and if you are making an Alice is Dead 4, than I can't wait!
Classic - simply classic, man.
I really like the color schemes as they fit to set a tone well. She really looks like she could kick some ass!
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